How is this for my story/novel?

Travis F asked:


Gears of Survival
written by: Travis

Plot:
The year is 2012. United States is being targeted by British Special Force Unit GREYHOUND using weapons of mass destruction. Eagle secret agent Ray Rinehart is called in to Dark Manado Island mission to rescue the nuclear disposal from being hijacked from the hands of GREYHOUND co-leader Jak Forest within three days if the US Government doesn't respond. Ray must confronts and defeat every terrorist members only that stands in his way.

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  • Gold Bracelets

    February 18th, 2010

    Camping Discounters

    I’m sorry to say, but that plot sounds like every other action book I’ve ever heard of.

  • E-OMC

    February 20th, 2010

    Silver Cigarette Cases

    I believe it has potential because to me its very imaginative. However, i havent really read every action book, but i have seen a lot of action MOVIES. And i must say, it does sound the exact same as others i’ve seen. All i think you should do is live up to the potential. Add a twist, add a more interesting and diverse plot, and make it not so repetitive as the rest of them out there.

  • survival gear

    February 22nd, 2010

    North Face Sale

    Maybe it does sound like every other action story, but that’s okay because that is the genre. That doesn’t mean it’s a cliche. There’s nothing wrong with it. I think the premise is solid.

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